Hi Valli,

Yep, that worked!!

Feedback coming soon.

Cheers,

Luke

@vallivanaro 

Hi again Valli,

Please find your writing review attached as a .docx

and as a PDF link below.

Any questions or doubts, let me know.

Cheers!!

Luke

Review-PDF

Hi Luke!

Here is my reviewed writting about politics.

Thanks! 🙂

Valli

@vallivanaro 

Hi Valli!

Would you mind making all the changes you can?

Then I'll look through them & guide you to the specific problems.

• For "the handling of", I'm now thinking it's better "how important it is to have a good political representative in our institutions that to handle of these situations."

Hope that helps.

Cheers😊,

Luke

Hi Luke!

Please, find my last review of the writing, reviewed yesterday during the class.

Thank you and have a nice long weekend!

Vallivana

@vallivanaro 

Hi Valli,

That's great, well done!!

Just a couple of little things to tidy up:

"Currently, the Valencian autonomous government has the mence means to deal with..."

"there are many tasks that civilians shouldn’t make do/carry out/undertake"

"many of the buildings that today have been flooded"

"improve the society."

Please find your Final Notes for this submission attached.

Hope you found the review process useful, and if you wouldn't mind writing a quick note to share publicly, explaining what you liked, that would be great!

Thanks, and all the best,

Luke😊