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Mr Face

 
Adrian González
(@adrianbisbe)
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  1. A year ago, Mr Face had Just lost his job. Luckily, a couple of months later, he found a new one, which was better than his previous job
  2. This time last year, Mr face was very hungry and had nothing to eat. So after shoping, he decided to go to a bar for breakfast, and then do a shop at the supermarket. 
  3. Mr face had to clean his house, but he didn't feel like it. After thinking it over, he decided to hire a housemaid.
  4. He failed the  examen because he hadn't studied enough. Two months later, and after studying more, he passed the exam without any problem.
  5. Mr face had planned to go to a party at his best friend's house, until his friend broke his leg. Thanks to his friend's mother who maneged to get a wheelchair, the party go ahead.
  6. Mr face was worried because he had just been robbed and didn't have enough money to pay the rent the next day. 
  7. A couple of months ago mr face broke up with his girlfriend. They had been arguing all day and neither of then could take it anymore.
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Topic starter Posted : 20/04/2021 1:58 pm
Luke
 Luke
(@lukelanguagetraining-com)

Hi Adrian!!

Well done - some great sentences about Mr Face, and the ups and downs of his life!

Just a few small things to consider:

1. punctuation: take out a comma and include a full stop.

2. and 3. Fine!

4. spelling of a word (Spanish auto-correct?)

5. verb needs to be in past tense.

6. and 7. Fine!

( Remember that's it's capital 'M' in 'Mr' and 'F' in 'Face' )

Cheers!!

Luke

Luke Guilfoyle, proud owner of lukelanguagetraining.com

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Posted : 20/04/2021 10:18 pm
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